I'm writing to tell you anything about how we students use the internet. As we all know it, the internet is palying a important part in our daily life. we often read news at home and abroad and learning foreign lauguages by ourselves on the internet.

I'm writing to tell you anything about how we students use the internet. As we all know it, the internet is palying a important part in our daily life. we often read news at home and abroad and learning foreign lauguages by ourselves on the internet.
I'm writing to tell you anything about how we students use the internet. As we all know it, the internet is palying a important part in our daily life. we often read news at home and abroad and learning foreign lauguages by ourselves on the internet.Sometimes we sent e-mails to our families as well as our friends.Besides, we listen music,enjoy films and play computer games on it. We can ever do shopping without leaving our homes. However, it has it's disadvantages. We waste too much time playing computer games, waht has a bad effect on our studies.What's worse,the bad information on the internet does great harm to us. I hope we can make use of the internet proper for our studies.（英语短文改错急谢谢）

I'm writing to tell you anything about how we students use the internet. As we all know it, the internet is palying a important part in our daily life. we often read news at home and abroad and learning foreign lauguages by ourselves on the internet.
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