女朋友做了几个英语作文题,我英语不好,谁能改改.Quality-oriented EducationQuality-oriented Education in China is very important.These days Chinese think students should integrated development.Students reach every aspect of a matter

女朋友做了几个英语作文题,我英语不好,谁能改改.Quality-oriented EducationQuality-oriented Education in China is very important.These days Chinese think students should integrated development.Students reach every aspect of a matter
女朋友做了几个英语作文题,我英语不好,谁能改改.
Quality-oriented Education
Quality-oriented Education in China is very important.These days Chinese think students should integrated development.Students reach every aspect of a matter in schools.Students not only should accept quality-oriented education,but only should accept exam-oriented education.More often than not students feel tired.
I think quality-oritented eaucation is indispensable.But schools sometime just consult mark of study.It is error of study.
I hope we couldn't join in exam.We can study someting that we are interested in.We needn't accept exam-oriented education.
A latter to mayor
Dear sir:
I'm an academician in your city.I love this city so I want to say something with you.
There are some spots in this city.I can see more people jump a queue when we wait for a bus.I can't stand people throwinh litter about.School education quality is poor.
I hope you will solve the problem.Beacuse I think if you were our mayor
.You should to our happiness.I have some suggestions.Government can give some money for education and encourage people obey the traffic rules.
I hope our city will be better.
your townspeople
Cars and pollution
With economic growth,more and more family buy private cars.Private cars bring convenience an enjoyment to us.But more and more private cars touch off some problem.Such as air pollution and heavy traffic.
In order to solve the problem we tink deeply that more city invest structure underground and encourage people go out by underground or bus.Government planting some tree to solve the air pollution.
I think things have always two sides to everythinh.We enjoy private cars but it can dead to more problem.So I encourage people cut down using provate.
Fake News
Among the four pollutions fakes report come first.Constant fake news and prevailing negative custom have challenged the bottom line of news and occupational ethics as well as public tolernance constantly.
I think the reasn caused the problem is that medium stretch of fact in order to quantity of sale and grovenment use fake news to cheat townspeople and some people want to be stat.
It is expected that we could boycott fake news.People's eyes are discerning.
最好能指出语病和错误..
女友马上考四级了..我每天都给她布置一道作文,希望对她有帮助..
但是我英语巨烂.....

女朋友做了几个英语作文题,我英语不好,谁能改改.Quality-oriented EducationQuality-oriented Education in China is very important.These days Chinese think students should integrated development.Students reach every aspect of a matter
那个作文里面错误真的好多,而且很多很简单的用法你女朋友都不知道吗?比如说：encourage somebody to do something,should 后面跟动词原形,从句的用法,enjoy doing ,还有很多读不通的,6月16号就要考了,我觉得很危险,在这么短的时间内想提高也不怎么可能,写作文的时候还是简单点,不要出现低级错误就好了,大头是听力,还是多听听听力吧.还有就是自己看看文章,一是锻炼阅读水平,还有也可以记记里面好的用法.祝你女朋友能考过

错误太多！！

天长了，不想看，就说一个，第一篇，should后面跟动词原形，哈哈！