英语小作文语法挑错A handsome man,who is called Jackie chan,was born on 1954.4.7 in H.K,is famous actor.He began to take part in the movie when he was 8 years old and he is famous for The Story Of Police,Who am I.He is an accomplished actor,w

英语小作文语法挑错A handsome man,who is called Jackie chan,was born on 1954.4.7 in H.K,is famous actor.He began to take part in the movie when he was 8 years old and he is famous for The Story Of Police,Who am I.He is an accomplished actor,w
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A handsome man,who is called Jackie chan,was born on 1954.4.7 in H.K,is famous actor.He began to take part in the movie when he was 8 years old and he is famous for The Story Of Police,Who am I.He is an accomplished actor,who is good at chinese KongFu and funning fighting.Jackie chan devoted his life to films.There is no doubt that he is a super star of Asia

英语小作文语法挑错A handsome man,who is called Jackie chan,was born on 1954.4.7 in H.K,is famous actor.He began to take part in the movie when he was 8 years old and he is famous for The Story Of Police,Who am I.He is an accomplished actor,w
A handsome man,who is called Jackie chan,was born on 1954.4.7 in H.K,who is a famous actor.He began to take part in the movie when he was 8 years old and he is famous for the cinima《The Story Of Police》and 《Who am I》.(我觉得上一句分为两句比较好：He began to take part in the movie when he was 8 years old .《The Story Of Police》and 《Who am I》are his most wonderful works.)He is an accomplished actor,who is good at chinese KongFu and funny fight.Jackie chan devoted his life to films.There is no doubt that he is a super star of Asia.
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A handsome man,who called Jakie chan,was born in 1954.4.7 in HK,is a famous actor,

第一句：who is 改who was，was 删掉，is a famous actor. 第二句中take part in movie 应改为take movie as his career. 倒数第二句中应改为devoted himself to。

A handsome man,who is called Jackie chan,was born in 1954.4.7 in H.K,is a famous actor.He began to join in the movie part when he was 8 years old and he is famous for The Story Of Police,Who am I.He ...

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A handsome man,who is called Jackie chan,was born in 1954.4.7 in H.K,is a famous actor.He began to join in the movie part when he was 8 years old and he is famous for The Story Of Police,Who am I.He is an accomplished actor,who is good at chinese KongFu and funning fighting.Jackie chan devoted his life to films.There is no doubt that he is a super star of Asia

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