有的话可以帮我改一下吗!HELP!帮帮忙看一下这句话有没有错,要不要改.The unhealth phenomenons were timely reported and,as a result of it,urged the related departmentto solve the problem.

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有的话可以帮我改一下吗!HELP!帮帮忙看一下这句话有没有错,要不要改.The unhealth phenomenons were timely reported and,as a result of it,urged the related departmentto solve the problem.

有的话可以帮我改一下吗!HELP!帮帮忙看一下这句话有没有错,要不要改.The unhealth phenomenons were timely reported and,as a result of it,urged the related departmentto solve the problem.
有的话可以帮我改一下吗!HELP!
帮帮忙看一下这句话有没有错,要不要改.
The unhealth phenomenons were timely reported and,as a result of it,urged the related department
to solve the problem.

有的话可以帮我改一下吗!HELP!帮帮忙看一下这句话有没有错,要不要改.The unhealth phenomenons were timely reported and,as a result of it,urged the related departmentto solve the problem.
The unhealth problem has been timely reported to urge the related department
to solve it.

首先phenomenon的复数是phenomena.
然后把urge前面加一个主语it，and连接的是两个并列的句子，句子就是需要主谓的.as a result of it 是插入语，你可以直接忽略掉.是这样吗？The unhealthy phenomenona were timely reported and,as a result,it urged the related depart...

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首先phenomenon的复数是phenomena.
然后把urge前面加一个主语it，and连接的是两个并列的句子，句子就是需要主谓的.as a result of it 是插入语，你可以直接忽略掉.

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我觉得把 urged 改为urging吧。

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