英语作文求批改1/人们对职业含有不同的理想2、我的理想职业3、我怎样为理想的职业做准备Choosinga jobPeople have their own thoughts in jobs.Some people want to become adoctor in the future,Some people want to become a

英语作文求批改1/人们对职业含有不同的理想2、我的理想职业3、我怎样为理想的职业做准备Choosinga jobPeople have their own thoughts in jobs.Some people want to become adoctor in the future,Some people want to become a
英语作文求批改
1/人们对职业含有不同的理想
2、我的理想职业
3、我怎样为理想的职业做准备
Choosinga job
People have their own thoughts in jobs.Some people want to become adoctor in the future,Some people want to become a teacher in the future.Thoseall differnet from my ideal job.
My ideal job is become a boss of a cake store.In my cake store,there are manywonderful cakes which look really colorfully.Every morning,I wil go to cakestore with my staffs.Firstly,cleaning up the store.Then,making nice cakesmaidfully.Finally,introducing our cakes to the customers and sale cakes.
Inorder to get my ideal job for a owner of cake store,I shoule prepare to knowsome knowledge sbout cakes.moreover,I need find the place where is best foropen a cake store.Then,searching for some people who also like make cakes as mystaffs.Last but not least,I should be able to make decilious cakes.I belive mycake store will be opened in the future,

英语作文求批改1/人们对职业含有不同的理想2、我的理想职业3、我怎样为理想的职业做准备Choosinga jobPeople have their own thoughts in jobs.Some people want to become adoctor in the future,Some people want to become a
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Choosing a job
People have their own opinions in jobs.Some people want to become doctors in the future while some people want to become teachers in the future, but those are all different from my ideal job.
My ideal job is to become the boss of a cake store.In my cake store,there are many wonderful cakes which look really colorful.Every morning,I wil go to my cakestore with my staffs.First of all,we will clean up the store together.Then,we are going to make nice cakes .Finally,we will introduce our cakes to the customers and sale cakes.
In order to realize my ideal job as the owner of a cake store,I should prepare to know some knowledge about cakes. Moreover,I need to find out a place that is the best place for me to open a cake store.Then,I will search for some people who also like making cakes as my staffs.Last but not the least,I should be able to make delicious cakes. I believe my cake store will open in the future,

Every person has different thought of an ideal job. Some would like to be a doctor and some would like to be a teacher. These jobs are different from my ideal job.
My ideal job is to be the bos...

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Every person has different thought of an ideal job. Some would like to be a doctor and some would like to be a teacher. These jobs are different from my ideal job.
My ideal job is to be the boss of a cake shop. In my cake shop, there will be many wonderful cakes which is really colorful. Every morning, I will go to the cake shop with my staffs. WE would start with the cleaning of the shop, follow by making nice cakes mindfully. We would then introduce our cakes to the customers and start selling them.
To make my ideal job comes true, I had start to gain knowledge of making cakes. I am also looking for a good location to open my cake shop. At the same time, I am also looking for people who are interested in making cakes to be hired as my staff. I should be able to equip myself with the knowledge to make delicious cakes and I believe that my cake shop will open soon.

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