英语语法纠错,帮我找找看.Villiam .Monroe ,An American loggers(伐木工),made a machine(机器) which can make wood.He stick the wood with the graphite(石墨).That was the first pencil.Now,the pencils are more and more popular.You can see

英语语法纠错,帮我找找看.Villiam .Monroe ,An American loggers(伐木工),made a machine(机器) which can make wood.He stick the wood with the graphite(石墨).That was the first pencil.Now,the pencils are more and more popular.You can see
英语语法纠错,帮我找找看.
Villiam .Monroe ,An American loggers(伐木工),made a machine(机器)
which can make wood.He stick the wood with the graphite(石墨).That was
the first pencil.Now,the pencils are more and more popular.You can see them everywhere.They are made of wood,and the wood is from the tree.Now the trees are fewer than before.We must save them.Let's stop cutting the trees.
Let's save our home.
Paper was invented(发明) in China.It has a long history.It is made of wood.It needs to cut down a lot of trees.That doesn’t protect environment(环保),but we can use another kind of paper,recycled paper(再生纸).It can be used in a lot of way.Don’t waste of paper,it is precious(珍贵的).
Hi,what colour is your school bag?Do you always go shopping?Of course you do.Everybody likes shopping but do you always bring the environmental protection bag?The other bags are made of plastic,can’t be dissolution(溶解)in the earth.Because of this,the river will be dirty.The trees won’t grow healthy.Please use the environmental protection bag.The world will be more beautiful.
In the south of France,a big storm blow down two trees.The master of the trees cut the leaves from one of the trees,and plant it into the earth.Then he retain(保留)the leaves of another tree and put the tree into the earth.He thinks people can be cool under it.
Next spring,the master is surprised of the trees.The tree without leaves now is strong and with a lot of green leaves,it is very healthy.But another one is wither(枯萎) and without leaves.What are these about?(这是怎么回事) Because the leaves need nutrition(营养),the tree needs nutrition,too.If the tree hasn’t any nutrition,it is going to die soon.

英语语法纠错,帮我找找看.Villiam .Monroe ,An American loggers(伐木工),made a machine(机器) which can make wood.He stick the wood with the graphite(石墨).That was the first pencil.Now,the pencils are more and more popular.You can see
第三行的第二个 the删掉 总体感觉写的很生硬,没有避开中文表达习惯,还有一些小问题,算不上错也不能说对 对于初学者 这些错误没有必要针对性改 否则对于今后的学习缺乏灵活性

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