作业帮请高手们,帮我看看这篇英语作文,可能有一些错误是过去式的作文来的: A xisit to Baiyun Mountain We visted to Baiyun Mountain. In moring,we went to school at 8:00
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请高手们,帮我看看这篇英语作文,可能有一些错误是过去式的作文来的: A xisit to Baiyun Mountain We visted to Baiyun Mountain. In moring,we went to school at 8:00
请高手们,帮我看看这篇英语作文,可能有一些错误
是过去式的作文来的:
A xisit to Baiyun Mountain
We visted to Baiyun Mountain. In moring,we went to school at 8:00 a.m. Our went to Baiyun Mountain by bus.We often felt happy.I like the plan.After we went to Baiyun Mountain.Some are tookl photo.Some are singed . Some are played game;If you like take photo,you will go to Baiyun Mountain.There are very good photos.Everyone go to Baiyun Mountain.You feel is a happy.In Afernoon.We went to school at 5:00 p.m. in the yuntai garden.We had a good times .
请高手们,帮我看看这篇英语作文,可能有一些错误是过去式的作文来的: A xisit to Baiyun Mountain We visted to Baiyun Mountain. In moring,we went to school at 8:00
看了一下,是有一点错误,我改了一下.
A xisit to Baiyun Mountain
We visted to Baiyun Mountain.In moring,we went to school at 8:00 a.m.We went to Baiyun Mountain by bus.We felt happy.I like the plan.After we went to Baiyun Mountain.Many friend are took photo.Someone are singed .Someone are played game;If you like take photo,you will go to Baiyun Mountain.There are many good scenery .Everyone go to Baiyun Mountain can feel happy.In Afernoon.We went to school at 5:00 p.m.in the yuntai garden.We had a good times .
oh,I like Baiyun Mouyain very much .I can't forget this day.
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visted拼错了吧 In moring 我觉得 是in the morning,Some are tookl photo.Some are singed . Some are played game 不是过去是吗 be动词错了 也不是被动 怎么这样用呢？？或者用动词的ing形式 也可以 a good times好像不用加s 我的水...
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visted拼错了吧 In moring 我觉得 是in the morning,Some are tookl photo.Some are singed . Some are played game 不是过去是吗 be动词错了 也不是被动 怎么这样用呢？？或者用动词的ing形式 也可以 a good times好像不用加s 我的水平较低 只能看出这些来~~望有帮助！！
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楼主，作文在哪里？现在有了呃，楼主，这个，好像语法、拼写、搭配上 有好多小错误， 先不一一指正了，尽量按照原文的意思，翻译如下： 《白云山游记》 俺们去了白云山。早上，俺们上午 8点上学。 我们滴，做公共汽车 去勒白云山 。俺们经常觉得快乐。俺喜欢这个计划。我们去勒白云山之后。有的照相，有的唱了歌了；有的玩了游戏了；如果你喜欢照相，你会去白云山。有特别好的相片。每个人去白云山...
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