英语作文,求纠错!包括大小写和语法,There are three store near the our school.One is Jenny's Department Store.One is Carol's Department Store.The other is Ham's Bargain StoreI love the Carol's Department Store,because it have the friedly

英语作文,求纠错!包括大小写和语法,There are three store near the our school.One is Jenny's Department Store.One is Carol's Department Store.The other is Ham's Bargain StoreI love the Carol's Department Store,because it have the friedly
英语作文,求纠错!包括大小写和语法,
There are three store near the our school.One is Jenny's Department Store.One is Carol's Department Store.The other is Ham's Bargain Store
I love the Carol's Department Store,because it have the friedly service and it is not the most expensive and it isn't the cheapest.But it still the most popular store
The Jenny's department Store is the more fash on able then the Carol's department Store.It is has the best service but it is the is it the more expensive than Carol's Department Store,too!
The Ham's bargain Store is the cheapest.But is also the worst.

英语作文,求纠错!包括大小写和语法,There are three store near the our school.One is Jenny's Department Store.One is Carol's Department Store.The other is Ham's Bargain StoreI love the Carol's Department Store,because it have the friedly
There are three stores near the our school. One is Jenny's Department Store. The other one is Carol's Department Store.The last one is Ham's Bargain Store
I love The Carol's Department Store, because it have the friedly service , it is not the most expensive and it isn't the cheapest. But it still the most popular store
The Jenny's department Store is the more fash on able then the Carol's department Store. It is has the best service but it is the is it the more expensive than Carol's Department Store,too!
The Ham's bargain Store is the cheapest. But is also the worst.

There are three stores near our school.
One is Jenny's Department Store. One is Carol's Department Store. another is Ham's Bargain Store
I love Carol's Department Store because it has th...

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There are three stores near our school.
One is Jenny's Department Store. One is Carol's Department Store. another is Ham's Bargain Store
I love Carol's Department Store because it has the friendliest service and it is not the most expensive .
And it's also the most popular store.
Jenny's department Store has more flash on sale than Carol's department Store.
It has the best service but it is more expensive than Carol's Department Store!
Ham's bargain Store is the cheapest. But it is also the worst.

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1,store=>stores
2,near the our... 去掉 the 或者 our
3，The other =>Another
4, because it have => because it has
5,friedy=>friendly
6, it is not the most expensive and it isn't the ...

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1,store=>stores
2,near the our... 去掉 the 或者 our
3，The other =>Another
4, because it have => because it has
5,friedy=>friendly
6, it is not the most expensive and it isn't the cheapest 改成 things in this store have a moderate price. 这家店的东西价格适中。
7，But it still the most popular store改成 It is the most popular store.
8,The Jenny's department Store is the more fash on able then the Carol's department Store改成Things in Jenny's Department Store are more fashionable than those in Carol's Department Store. 珍妮百货商店的东西比卡罗尔的时尚。
9，It is has the best service but it is the is it the more expensive than Carol's Department Store,too! 改成 The things are more expensive than those in Carol's Department Store though it has the best service. 尽管它有最好的服务，但是东西的价格比卡罗尔百货商店的贵。
10,The Ham's bargain Store is the cheapest. But is also the worst.改成 Things in Ham's Bargain Store are the cheapest. 火腿廉价商店的东西最便宜。
11,But is also the worst. 改成 But their quality is the worst. 但是它们的质量是最差的。
认真地该过了，望采纳～ ：）

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