高考英语写作 帮修改下并指出语法错误.求指出错误.点评.准备参加高考了Dear Proffessor Wang.I m LI HUA ,a chinese students From English international school,During the summer vacation studing time,I have difficulty in langua

高考英语写作 帮修改下并指出语法错误.求指出错误.点评.准备参加高考了Dear Proffessor Wang.I m LI HUA ,a chinese students From English international school,During the summer vacation studing time,I have difficulty in langua
高考英语写作 帮修改下并指出语法错误.
求指出错误.点评.准备参加高考了
Dear Proffessor Wang.
I m LI HUA ,a chinese students From English international school,
During the summer vacation studing time,I have difficulty in language
communication,So i turn to you for your help.
Firstly,I found I coudn't speak fluently and coudn't adapt English
prounounce,so that some people think I m impolite because they don't know
i m in at a loss in understanding what they spoken.
secondly,I also found i could't understand the English's slang.
Reading the local newspaper neither confused me,therefore some weird
grammar in it that i think maybe this is language difference between my
native language...
would you please do me in favor?I will appreciate if you could give me
some advice.
I m looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li hua

高考英语写作 帮修改下并指出语法错误.求指出错误.点评.准备参加高考了Dear Proffessor Wang.I m LI HUA ,a chinese students From English international school,During the summer vacation studing time,I have difficulty in langua
1.第一段中：第一句改为I'm a Chinese student from International English School.第二句改为During the school days,I find I have difficulty in language communication.Here I hope you can give me some advice.你要表达的意思我大致能理解,但是你所写出来的却错误多多.第一句中I'm 你少了个撇号,再者,人名不该全部大写,只有首字母才需大写如果是三个字的,就该是这样的：Li Xinhua.还有英语国际学校是学校名,首字母也要大写,此外,标点符号你没仔细琢磨,第一句话已经结束了,就改用句号.下面一句也是这样的情况.
2.第二段中：第一句中第二个couldn't不需要,前面有一个,还有pronounce改为pronounciation名词性的.最后一句表达太罗嗦,如果可以简单表达就不要再去找多余的麻烦.这一句改为：because they don't know I couldn't understand their spoken language.
3.第三段中：第一句,English本就是形容词性的,不必再加's.neither一般都是和nor连用的,所以不要单独使用其中任一.这一句去掉neither.还有语法怎么能用weird来修饰呢?你可以用difficult,这一句你就可以改为：some difficult grammer in it make I think there is a big difference between Chinese and English.
4.第四段中：第一句do me a favor 是固定搭配.
5.第五段中：第一句是I'm 有’的.
最后的结尾语应该是yours在第一行,truly在第二行.
署名时人名要大写.
建议：要细心啊!细小的错误也致命!