求英语大神帮忙修改一下错误,谢谢啦~Lanzhouwill meet a short tourist off-season from next week After a busy summer vacation, the surge oftourists crowd in the airport and railway station gradually eased. From nextweek, a short tourist

求英语大神帮忙修改一下错误,谢谢啦~Lanzhouwill meet a short tourist off-season from next week After a busy summer vacation, the surge oftourists crowd in the airport and railway station gradually eased. From nextweek, a short tourist
求英语大神帮忙修改一下错误,谢谢啦~
Lanzhouwill meet a short tourist off-season from next week
After a busy summer vacation, the surge oftourists crowd in the airport and railway station gradually eased. From nextweek, a short tourist off –season in September will come to railway、highway and civil aviation.
Before National Day, the tickets from thetrains which start from Lanzhou station are enough, even some of them can notbe sold out. The price of air tickets will have one or two discount in Zhongchuanairport; at the mean time, the tourist routes’ price may have a slight decline.But during National Day, the railway、highway and civil aviation will have a busy time. Boththe local route and the remote route will meet another peak.
Therefore, it is a good time for citizens totake a trip during the ten days.Though,as the weather turns cool and a largetemperature difference day and night, citizens must pay attention to keep warm.

求英语大神帮忙修改一下错误,谢谢啦~Lanzhouwill meet a short tourist off-season from next week After a busy summer vacation, the surge oftourists crowd in the airport and railway station gradually eased. From nextweek, a short tourist
错的太多了吧,很多标点符号都用错了 ,还有些句子没有了介词.还有很多语法问题.例如这个句子 But during National Day,the railway、highway and civil aviation will have a busy time 用BUT作一个句子的开头10个老师有9个也给你错了,试用however ,代替这个句子就好多了.然后节日前面加the,变成the national day .还有就是英文符号是没有（、）这个逗号的.我看不下去了···你要让我们改也得认真打一篇你认为修改的上来,目测宽松的老师会给你60/100 ,严格的老师50/50.

兰州将遇到一个短的旅游淡季从下周
在一个忙碌的暑假,增兵游人人群中,机场和火车站逐渐缓解。从们,一个短的旅游淡季在九月会来铁路、公路和民航。
在国庆节之前,票从火车开始从兰州站是足够的,甚至一些人可以不是卖完了。机票的价格会有一个或两个折扣在中川机场;在此同时,旅游线路的价格可能会有轻微的下降。但是国庆期间,铁路、公路和民航将有一个繁忙的时间。Boththe本地路由和远程航线会遇到...

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兰州将遇到一个短的旅游淡季从下周
在一个忙碌的暑假,增兵游人人群中,机场和火车站逐渐缓解。从们,一个短的旅游淡季在九月会来铁路、公路和民航。
在国庆节之前,票从火车开始从兰州站是足够的,甚至一些人可以不是卖完了。机票的价格会有一个或两个折扣在中川机场;在此同时,旅游线路的价格可能会有轻微的下降。但是国庆期间,铁路、公路和民航将有一个繁忙的时间。Boththe本地路由和远程航线会遇到另一个高峰。
因此,它是一个很好的时间让公民在十天的旅行。不过,随着天气转凉,昼夜对远距离温度差异,公民必须注意保暖。

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Lanzhou will meet a short tourist off-season from next week on.
After a busy summer vacation, the surge of tourists crowd in the airport and railway station gradually eased. From next week on, a...

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Lanzhou will meet a short tourist off-season from next week on.
After a busy summer vacation, the surge of tourists crowd in the airport and railway station gradually eased. From next week on, a short tourist off –season in September will begin in railway、highway and civil aviation.
Before National Day, the tickets from trains which start from Lanzhou station are enough, even some of them can not be sold out. The price of air tickets will have one or two discount in Zhongchuan Airport; at the mean time, the tourist routes’ prices may have a slight decline.But during National Day, the railway、highway and civil aviation will have a busy time. Both the local routes and the remote routes will meet another peak.
Therefore, it is a good time for citizens to take a trip during the ten-day vocation.as the weather is turning cooler and cooler, in spite of a large temperature difference betweem day and night, citizens must be careful to keep warm.

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